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A good, couple decades ago...

In a small town, there lived an equally small family, by the name Callaghan. The Callaghan family was famous in their town for being the richest family for miles around. Even though everyone knew about the Callaghan’s', no one knew how they came upon their riches.

The Callaghan family had only 6 people at the time. There was, Mister Callaghan himself, his wife, and both of his parents. His eldest child was a son, and his youngest, a daughter.

The boy was very protective of his younger sister. His name was Lucian Vail. He was 15 years of age during this event. He was tall, with messy dark-brown hair, hazel eyes, and an even, tan complexion. His sister, Keira Vail, was 14 years of age. She was a delicate girl. Her eyes were a very pale green that shimmered in the sunlight. Her long, curly, dark brown hair was almost longer than her height. She was fair-skinned topped off her doll-like appearance. She was a curious girl, just like her brother.

One day, the two of them set off for the candy shop to buy sweets for each other with their allowance. The other girls her age stared at Keira's beautiful dress. Even though it was her normal dress, it was nicer than the other girls' formal dresses. The girls also gazed at Lucian's handsome face as he smiled at Keira, as he fed her the chocolate her bought her. In turn, Keira let Lucian take a lick of her ice-cream.

"A-an indirect k-kiss!" one girl whispered to another.

If only those girls knew they were related...

Later that afternoon, they were walking home when a strange two-head clown passed by, and handed Keira a flier. Lucian could have sworn he saw the female’s eyes flash blood-red before she left.

The flier read, “Dark Woods Circus.”

“Lucian, let’s go!” Keira stated, almost processed.

With that, the headed off to the woods.
This is the storyline, for my next web-comic.
Inspired by: ALICE HUMAN SACRIFICE and DARK WOODS CIRCUS

If you want to see it, go to YOUTUBE, and search those names.
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majohnson9191 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
Please finish.
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starjade12 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Is there more? I want to read if there is!
IT'S AWESOME~
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EveningStarMikazuki Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2010   Writer
You're writing a webcomic... of this? I MUST READ ITT! Can you tell me where it is located?
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DarkDracowulf Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it :3
*is currsently obsessed with the songs and listening to them at the very moment*
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Di-Vamp Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009
Love the story so far, but i cant get onto youtube, damn!
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KittehKat55 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
i just saw the video/song for this on youtube yesterday :]
creepily beautiful, i thought. i loved itt.
have you heard of the Fear Garden as well ??
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Panitierre Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009
no i haven't,
i'm gonna go search it.
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KittehKat55 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009
^^
tis by the Vocaloids as well :3
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Gukku31 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2009
love the story xOO
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Panitierre Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2009
YEAA!! YOU ROCK SO HAARD!!
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